Friday, November 2, 2007

Mr. Harvey

In the case of George Harvey he is sentenced to death row.Mr.Harvey is going to be on death row for 2 years. . Mr. Harvey is sentenced because no one should be able to sit there for some horrible things he did to these women and not be put to there death, when he took away the lives of other people. He will be sentenced to his death because he will be living luxury in jail, and that is not going to show him that he did anything wrong. The death sentence is something that he should go through because he raped and murder those women for no reason and they never do anything to him , he just randomly picked them out and killed them. The Salmons are very glad that Mr. Harvey is getting what he deserves for what he did to there Susie. The Court thinks that for the amounts of women Mr. Harvey has killed he will be only on death row for 1 year and then his date for his execution will be set . Everyone in the city will be put at peace now that Mr. Harvey is going to behide bars until the day of his execution.

3 comments:

Claire said...

You have made a good point, but you have alot of run on sentences. I think if i didnt know what it was about I wouldnt be able to make sense of what you said.I liked your conclusion.

Mary said...

Very good, especailly in describing the situation. I like how put your story together.

aloraburke said...

Well done, well done. Although there's a few sentences that made little sence to me, but proofreading would eliminate that for sure. Your ideas were very good. I agree with them for the most part, and I like how you talked about the Salmons and how you took their personal concerns into account before making your decision; like I said, well done!